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Deleted Scenes – Unedited
Some of these are 1st drafts! I feel naked giving some of these to you, but it’s also fun to look at deleted scenes. Keep in mind that while some might’ve gone through a development editor, none of them have been through a copy editor (the one who works on grammar). They are all polished and some probably aren’t written very good.
What’s included below:
- Deleted scenes from the RMC1
- Deleted scenes from the RMC2 is soon to come.
- Deleted scenes from the RMC3 is soon to come
- Other will be revealed later
Deleted Scenes RMC1
Chapter 4: After Breakfast
This is at the beginning of the RMC1, when Qloey first meets the other bachelors in the breakfast room in chapter 4.
The published version shows Prince Alejandro following Qloey out of the breakfast room and escorting her away. Originally, the scene was with Kipp, but my editor pointed out that Kipp had too many scenes in the beginning and he was too obvious as a contender. So I changed it to Alejandro, but this scene suits Alejandro well since this wasn’t the only time he did this.
Chapter 14: Extended Physical Competition
1st Draft – unedited
This scene was deleted for three reasons. While I actually enjoyed this chapter and the tension that Glynnda caused, I designed the book to have a flow where the scenes went from action- downtime – action – downtime. However, between the Physical Challenge and the Game Show the following day, there was too much action going on.
The second issue was that I wanted to add more interactions between Qloey and the bachelors and this scene fell too far from…
RMC 2: Prince Zadkiel Deleted Scenes
Opening Ceremony: Book Two (Prince Zadkiel)
1st Draft – unedited
The first book, Princess Qloey, had been in the review stage when I finished the first draft of book two, but readers were saying there were too many characters. The opening ceremony was overbearing and needed a change.
I really liked Pyper. It wasn’t until after I had finished book three (The Fate of the Empire) that I decided to almost completely eliminate Pyper from the series.
More to come
Pyper’s Deleted Scenes
Notes about this scene
This takes place after the opening ceremony and ball, when the girls enter the Bachelorette Pad for the first time.
Pyper of Centaurus burst into the room with both doors flying open, as if she owned the place. Then she put her hands on her hips and took a good look at the room’s decor.
With a smile on her face, Pyper said nothing to the contestants in the room and skipped around to check out all the main areas, then stepped into her private room next to Grace and Esperanza’s bedchambers. She heard as the two girls chatted in the room next door about dresses and frilly things that mattered very little to her. She owned dresses, but found trousers to be far more comfortable and versatile.